Did You Ever Poems

 WALT: Use a thesaurus to make precise and interesting language choices.

Learning Reflection:

I was not able to use a thesaurus at first but then Mrs P told me to and I changed some words using a thesaurus for example: It use it to be legs shaking and I changed it to legs wobbling.

Next time I will use a thesaurus to make precise and interesting language choices without Mrs P telling me to.

Sir Peter Blake Camp MERC

My Reflection:
This is my Camp MERC certificate! We have officially finished Camp. The activity I liked the most was surfing, I liked how the waves carried me on my surf board. Throughout camp I have felt really proud of myself for doing all these things I never thought I would of done such as Tree climbing, It was really scary climbing a enormous tree! but I showed resilience by giving it a go and not giving up.

Camp MERC Acrostic Poem

WALT: Edit and revise my writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback

Learning Reflection

I was able to change some sentences that didn't make sense and some spelling mistakes such as the word hilarious and activities because Kayde told me to.

Next time I will try and not have any spelling mistakes by looking at the words and correcting the words with red lines under them.  I will sit next to someone and try to get different feedback.   I will also re-read when I'm finished so I can make sure all my sentences make sense.